ooooh very interesting and promising start!! I really like your writing style and the keyboard mechanics you put in this story! And those little sentences at the top of the page?? love 'em. Can't wait to see where you'll bring us and to discover more of this world. I already love Melanie and Cain <33
p.s. there was a little bug with the questions to Cain, but nothing major
WAH i was wondering if anyone would notice those little headers :o ! not that they mean anything of course, nothing at all... :)
as for the bug, if you could tell me what choices you specifically picked to get there, I would really appreciate it TwT those questions have consistently given me troubles lol
yeah, of course, no problem! i chose "who are you?" and then "Do you at least remember your name". It worked just fine, but when i asked the other questions the answer to the name continued to appear, like in this screenshot
Good luck on fixing this! i don't know much about code, but i know how annoying these things can be T_T
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ooooh very interesting and promising start!! I really like your writing style and the keyboard mechanics you put in this story! And those little sentences at the top of the page?? love 'em. Can't wait to see where you'll bring us and to discover more of this world. I already love Melanie and Cain <33
p.s. there was a little bug with the questions to Cain, but nothing major
WAH i was wondering if anyone would notice those little headers :o ! not that they mean anything of course, nothing at all... :)
as for the bug, if you could tell me what choices you specifically picked to get there, I would really appreciate it TwT those questions have consistently given me troubles lol
Good luck on fixing this! i don't know much about code, but i know how annoying these things can be T_T
ohhh you have a screenshot as well, you're an angel, tysm!!
this is the reoccurring problem i had that i was sure i stamped out (narrator voice they were wrong) - thank you for pointing it out :) !!
god I love venom scenarios to have someone completely know you in a way noone else possibly could its so intimate smitten at the idea of this already
ohhh, this is such a lovely way of thinking about it omg, i really hadn't considered that :o i hope i do it justice, then !! ^w^
cant wait for more upds, i love it so far!! ^_^
(im gnna lick all up on cains face)LOL i was worried people would find them annoying, so I'm glad you enjoy your (un)wanted companion >w<